Cliches to use when raising money

People say this, below!

If you are more modest then what’s wrong with your deal?

If you are the same, feels fake.

If you are more subtle but manage the same idea, perhaps you are sincere.

X who started y and z (sold to A). He just raised $2.5 at a $7 pre, was oversubscribed, took a little more than planned. X says they have permission to take another $250,000 in follow on if they “find an investor we think is a good fit / value add.” Would you like an intro? Deck attached.